#test OK so the instructions say, "Write one paragraph that explains the similarities and one that explains the differences." You have only one paragraph, with two similarities. So there's some work to do there. Also look at your first sentence: "Well I think that the author starts it off with that is because it is important to know that a lot of people got arrested for doing this and refusing to get up from their seats." Even if you leave out the unnecessary "Well I think that," the first several words are still confusing: "the author starts it off with that is because..." How could you write that to make it more clear what you're saying? (2016)